希望帮我检查下语法句法错误Another famous street food is sumai,which is a kind of dumpling but is totally different from the common one.It is round and its fillings are made of rice.The wrapper of it are made of flour.Sumai can be easily

希望帮我检查下语法句法错误Another famous street food is sumai,which is a kind of dumpling but is totally different from the common one.It is round and its fillings are made of rice.The wrapper of it are made of flour.Sumai can be easily
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Another famous street food is sumai,which is a kind of dumpling but is totally different from the common one.It is round and its fillings are made of rice.The wrapper of it are made of flour.Sumai can be easily found in markets and stores nearby streets.It is originated in Inner Mongolia but becomes popular in Liaoning province.The most famous of which is Ma’s Sumai.In early times people ate it as snake when drinking tea.It’s a little salty but smells sweet.So nowadays we have it for breakfast and for snake.The material used in it are all good to people’s health,which add to its popularity.
是看英文有无错误 不是翻译成中文……

希望帮我检查下语法句法错误Another famous street food is sumai,which is a kind of dumpling but is totally different from the common one.It is round and its fillings are made of rice.The wrapper of it are made of flour.Sumai can be easily
单词错误：people ate it as snake 和So nowadays we have it for breakfast and for snake.中的 snake
应为snack
语法错误：
1.in Liaoning province.The most famous of which is Ma’s Sumai.中的which应该改为them或把the前面的句号改成逗号,这样句子变成正确的非限制性定语从句
2.The material used in it are all good to people’s health中的are应该改为is 这里 material应是不可数的
material 在字典中的英语解释是a substance that things can be made from 材料；原料 countable or uncountable .
文中material没有加s ,应是不可数的
错误很少,可能就这些吧

小吃 应该是snack吧 你写的snake好像是蛇哦，其他好像没什么错误哦，写的蛮好的

另一个著名的街头食品是只有苏麦,这是一种饺子却完全不同的人。它是圆的,其馅由米饭。包装是面粉制成的。只有苏麦可轻易找到在市场和商店附近的街道。它是源自于内蒙古却在辽宁省变得流行。其中最著名的是麻萨诸塞州的只有苏麦。在早期的时候人们把它吃了蛇当喝茶。这有点咸的,但闻起来很香。所以现在我们把它当作早餐和蛇。在它的材料都是好到人民健康,增加其知名度。 snacks才是小吃 snake是蛇...

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另一个著名的街头食品是只有苏麦,这是一种饺子却完全不同的人。它是圆的,其馅由米饭。包装是面粉制成的。只有苏麦可轻易找到在市场和商店附近的街道。它是源自于内蒙古却在辽宁省变得流行。其中最著名的是麻萨诸塞州的只有苏麦。在早期的时候人们把它吃了蛇当喝茶。这有点咸的,但闻起来很香。所以现在我们把它当作早餐和蛇。在它的材料都是好到人民健康,增加其知名度。 snacks才是小吃 snake是蛇

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