I want to give you some advice about whether you should publish your ideas.这句话在在哪错了?

I want to give you some advice about whether you should publish your ideas.这句话在在哪错了?
I want to give you some advice about whether you should publish your ideas.这句话在在哪错了?

I want to give you some advice about whether you should publish your ideas.这句话在在哪错了?
about改成on.some advice on sth.（关于某事的建议）这是固定搭配.
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I want to give you some advice about you whether should publish your ideas。

some advice on sth.（关于某事的建议）这是固定搭配