谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,有错帮忙说下正确句子.How do I spend my summer vacationNow ,all student are spending their summer vacations.We are all very happy we have two months to relax .In these days .I ‘m not v

谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,有错帮忙说下正确句子.How do I spend my summer vacationNow ,all student are spending their summer vacations.We are all very happy we have two months to relax .In these days .I ‘m not v
谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,有错帮忙说下正确句子.
How do I spend my summer vacation
Now ,all student are spending their summer vacations.We are all very happy we have two months to relax .In these days .I ‘m not very busy but free .
Our homework is not too much ,so we have many times to relax .I usually do my homework in the moring .So I get up not too late .And I also like listen to English at night.
And on my vacation ,I like watching TV very much .I usually watch TV after doing my homework or after lunch、after supper .But I don’t watch TV for a long time .That makes my eyes turn to bad ,and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV for a long time .I also play computer ,I often read the news ,study English or play computer games on computer .It ‘s very interesting ,I can learn some interesting and helpful things ,too.
Except these things,I sometimes go to my neighbour’s house to look after their son ,Liu Yulin .He’s a cute but a little naughty boy .He always make us very happy .So ,we all like him very much..
But for many reasons ,I don’t go sighting .What a pity But I hope I can go on a trip next summer vacation.
How about your summer vacation?

谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,有错帮忙说下正确句子.How do I spend my summer vacationNow ,all student are spending their summer vacations.We are all very happy we have two months to relax .In these days .I ‘m not v
How do I spend my summer vacation
Now ,all student are on their summer vacation.We are all very happy because we have two months to relax .In these days .I ‘m not very busy but rather free.
Our homework is not too much ,so we have plenty of time to relax .I usually do my homework in the morning,so I get up early everyday.And I also like to listen to English at night.
During my vacation ,I also like to watch TV.I usually watch TV after doing my homework or after lunch or supper .But I don’t watch TV for a long time,since that is bad for my eyes and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV too much .I also use the computer.I often read the news,study English and play computer games .It ‘s very interesting ,and I can learn more interesting and helpful things.
Besides these things,I sometimes go to my neighbour’s house to look after their son ,Liu Yulin .He’s a cute but a little naughty boy .He always make us very happy .So ,we all like him very much..
But for many reasons ,I can't go on a trip .What a pity !But I hope I can go on a trip next summer vacation.
How about your summer vacation?
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have many times改为time
.I usually do my homework in the moring . So I get up not too late
而且如果用so应用，号
I also like listen to English at ，like后面跟to do 形式，like to
after lunch、after supper .有点罗嗦，after lunch or supper .
That makes my eyes turn to bad，turn to有求助于某人的意思，似乎不太合适，建议去掉
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We are all very happy that we have two months to relax
We don't have much homework , so we have more time to relax
So I don't get up too late . And I also like listening to English at night....

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We are all very happy that we have two months to relax
We don't have much homework , so we have more time to relax
So I don't get up too late . And I also like listening to English at night.
And in my vacation time
I usually watch TV after doing my homework, after lunch or supper.
But I don’t watch TV for too long.
That makes my eyes hurt ,and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV for too long.
I often read the news ,study English or play computer games on computer.
neighbours'
He always makes us very happy
I didn’t go to any sighting .What a pity ! But I hope I can go for a trip in the next summer vacation.
不错啊 多大年纪了？ 语法没太多毛病，小地方有些毛躁。

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