帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Seco

帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Seco
帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误
Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Second,don't eat junk food,it is bad for our bodies.If you eat junk food too much,maybe you will fall ill.In order to your health,you\d better eat healthy food.Third,I think students should do exercise every day,But be careful not to hurt yourself.
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帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Seco
第二局可改成don't go across the road when the traffic light turn red

1.We are going to visit the British Museum tomorrow. 我们约好早上8点在校门口集合， and we will go there on foot.
评语：语法错误。这件事是属于已过去式的，所以应该用（past tense)。
更正：Yesterday, we'd paid a visit to the British Museum...

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1.We are going to visit the British Museum tomorrow. 我们约好早上8点在校门口集合， and we will go there on foot.
评语：语法错误。这件事是属于已过去式的，所以应该用（past tense)。
更正：Yesterday, we'd paid a visit to the British Museum. After gathering outside the school gate at around eight in the morning, we started to walk to our destination.
2. When we get to the museum , we must obey the rules of the museum.
更正：When we (entered) the museum , we must obey the rules of the museum.
3. For example, we can't touch the exhibits with our hands, and we make noise there. I hope you can follow above.
建议：For example, we are not allowed to touch the exhibits with our bare hands and we have to be silenced in the museum.
4. When we are visiting ,we need to observe the exhibits carefully, we need to take our pen and notebook to note the interesting things there and 下周一交一份关于参观的报告。
建议：While visiting, we were ordered to observe the exhibits carefully and then jot down all related information which is useful for us in producing a quality work of the visiting reports
that required to hand by next Monday.
大致上没有太多的错误。只是句子上的结构而以。加油！

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