英语高手作文批阅day ,my mood is bad ,because of i find that there are some people in my heart ,but i can not forget them,one of my classmates is xiao jun ,and nother is da yu ,the third is one of my girl classmates,i feel i miss them very muc

英语高手作文批阅day ,my mood is bad ,because of i find that there are some people in my heart ,but i can not forget them,one of my classmates is xiao jun ,and nother is da yu ,the third is one of my girl classmates,i feel i miss them very muc
英语高手作文批阅
day ,my mood is bad ,
because of i find that
there are some people in my heart ,
but i can not forget them,one of my classmates is xiao jun ,
and nother is da yu ,the third is one of my girl classmates,i feel i miss them very much ,
but ,there are so many excuses that i can not connect to them.
so i feel sorry,what is more is i feel regetful to myself .
i know that there is not inportant,because of it has been gone.and why?why can i meet her?i do not want to .but it has happened,i find it important,and when i meet her,i am happy ,especially her words and mature,which is not as the same as other girls.comparatively speaking ,she is a good girl,there are a lot of good things about her .for instance ,she is interested in writing,and ,she is kind-hearted,and the most import things of it is she is a mature woman,which makes me amazed,i also am interested man ,why i am addicted to worrying
god,what is up for this?what the thins i feel happy is that i will go home.i do not give up,today is the future.lovely.
上述是我写的日志,请英语高手帮我批改一下,
为了考六级的作文准备啊，帮帮
朋友提出些建议，或者说是提出更好的提高作文的方法，我天天都在写英文日志，为了就是提高我的英文写作水平，我深知自己英文写作不太好.....

英语高手作文批阅day ,my mood is bad ,because of i find that there are some people in my heart ,but i can not forget them,one of my classmates is xiao jun ,and nother is da yu ,the third is one of my girl classmates,i feel i miss them very muc
i'm not in the mood,because i find that i really miss 3 of my classmates who i can not get touch with for certain reasons.I can never forget you all in my deep heart:xiaojun,dayu and another girl that i dont want usher her name here.I'm day by day obssessed by the the missing of you and i feel regretful to the important days which is gone.tell me why,please.Why can i never again meet her anymore?I dont want the department with you,although it cant be reverted forever.I appreciate her elegence of speaking as well as the mature manners which distinguish her from all other girls.She is good girl in my eyes because she's so so kind to others and what is most important lies in her matureness which intoxicating me.
what makes me happy is that i will go home now,and i will notgive up.i believe in that seizing today,gasping future.

同志，建议你每天把日记给老师批改

如果是自己的日记,无须太过于注重语法!主要能表达出来!