急.高一英语短文改错Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your.Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your stores on Jisfang Road.They all like the shape and color of it.And now something is wrong with it.There is big n

急.高一英语短文改错Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your.Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your stores on Jisfang Road.They all like the shape and color of it.And now something is wrong with it.There is big n
急.高一英语短文改错Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your.
Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your stores on Jisfang Road.They all like the shape and color of it.And now something is wrong with it.There is big noise when it turned on.At first the noise is low but gradually it becomes louder an louder.To make the matters worse;it even stops working sometime.This makes us feel very disappointing.So I have to write for you to ask for help.Would you please send somebody to repair it?I will stay at home wait for you this weekend.Please call me before you came.My telephone number is 8965-4321.
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急.高一英语短文改错Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your.Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your stores on Jisfang Road.They all like the shape and color of it.And now something is wrong with it.There is big n
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Two months ago my family bought a refrigerator in your stores (stores-> store) on Jisfang Road.They (They -We) all like the shape and color of it.And (And -> But) now something is (something is -> there is something) wrong with it.There is big noise when it (加 is) turned on.At first the noise is low but gradually it becomes louder an (an -〉and)louder.To make the matter (matters-> matter) worse;(; -> ,)it even stops working sometime (sometime-> sometimes).This makes us feel very disappointing (disappointing -> disappointed).So I have to write for (for -> to) you to ask for help.Would you please send somebody to repair it?I will stay at home (加 to) wait for you this weekend.Please call me before you came (came -> come).My telephone number is 8965-4321.

color前要加the 第二句的and改为but it后面加is
第三句中的an改为and
There is 改为There has matters改为matter
sometime改为sometimes disppointing改为disppointed

help改为helping