各位英文达人,帮忙看看作业的语法错误和用法不当,非常谢谢Sports convey different messages to public; never give up is one of important and positive message which sports try to send to fans all the time. One player will be aband

各位英文达人,帮忙看看作业的语法错误和用法不当,非常谢谢Sports convey different messages to public; never give up is one of important and positive message which sports try to send to fans all the time. One player will be aband
各位英文达人,帮忙看看作业的语法错误和用法不当,非常谢谢
Sports convey different messages to public; never give up is one of important and positive message which sports try to send to fans all the time. One player will be abandoned by the fans immediately only if he or she gives up a game before the end. Victory and defeat always be decided at the last moment in many sports; in fact, this moment usually the most exciting part. For example, in one game of NBA 2009, Josh Smith’s final dunk helped Atlanta Hawks won the Houston Rockets at the last moment. After Josh Smith got the point, it only remained 0.7 second; Rockets still tried to struggle, even though in less than one second. Players have a feeling that hopes always come with them, so they always battle to the last moment no matter whether they can win the game. And this exists in American movies and cartoons too. For instance, in the Space Jam, Michael Jordan leads his cartoon dream team to play against the Monster team. Cartoon team won the game by Michael’s final dunk at the very last second. It seems impossible, but that is the spirit which sports want to convey to public.

各位英文达人,帮忙看看作业的语法错误和用法不当,非常谢谢Sports convey different messages to public; never give up is one of important and positive message which sports try to send to fans all the time. One player will be aband
Sports convey different messages to (the) public; (“never give up”) is one of (the) important and positive message(s) which sports try to send to fans all the time.(A) player will be abandoned by the fans immediately (if) he or she gives up before (the game comes to an) end.Victory and defeat are always decided at the last moment in many sports; in fact,this moment (is)usually the most exciting part (of the game).For example,in one NBA (match in) 2009,Josh Smith’s final dunk helped Atlanta Hawks (win) the Houston Rockets at the last moment.After Josh Smith got the point,only 0.7 second (remained); Rockets still tried to (fight back),even though less than one second (was left).Players have a feeling that hopes always come with them,so they always battle to the last moment no matter whether they can win the game.And this exists in American movies and cartoons too.For instance,in the Space Jam,Michael Jordan (led) his cartoon dream team to play against the Monster team.Cartoon team won the game by Michael’s final dunk at the very last second.It (may appear) impossible,but that is the spirit which sports want to convey to (the) public.
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Sports convey different messages （different kinds of message) to (the) public; never give (giving) up is one of (the most) important and positive message which sports try to send to fans...

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Sports convey different messages （different kinds of message) to (the) public; never give (giving) up is one of (the most) important and positive message which sports try to send to fans all the time. One player will be abandoned by the fans immediately only if he or she gives up a game before the end. Victory and defeat always be decided at the last moment in many sports; in fact, this moment (is) usually the most exciting part. For example, in one game(换成match) of NBA 2009, Josh Smith’s final dunk helped Atlanta Hawks won the Houston Rockets at the last moment. After Josh Smith got the point, it only remained 0.7 second;(there was only 0.7 second remained) Rockets still tried to struggle, even though in(换成there was only因为even though引导句子） less than one second. Players have a feeling that hopes always come with them, so they always battle to the last moment no matter whether they can win the game. And this exists in American movies and cartoons too. For instance, in the Space Jam, Michael Jordan leads his cartoon dream team to play against the Monster team. Cartoon team won(wins) the game by Michael’s final dunk at the very last second. It seems impossible, but that is the spirit which sports want to convey to (the) public.

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Sports convey (deliver好一点) different messages to THE public; never give up is one of important and positive messageS which（THAT好一点） sports ARE sendING to THE fans all the time. One player will be aban...

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Sports convey (deliver好一点) different messages to THE public; never give up is one of important and positive messageS which（THAT好一点） sports ARE sendING to THE fans all the time. One player will be abandoned by the fans immediately (only去掉） if he or she gives up a game before the end.（这句话有点没道理，放弃一场比赛就会被抛弃？太不讲理了） Victory and defeat （用Winng And Loosing就行了，Victory and defeat是比较大的词） always be（ARE） decided at the last moment in many sports; in fact, this moment usually IS the most exciting part. For example, in one game of NBA 2009, Josh Smith’s final dunk helped Atlanta Hawks won （beat打败） the Houston Rockets at（IN） the last moment （minute,别再用Moment了）. After Josh Smith got the point, it only remained 0.7 second （only0.7 second remained); THE Rockets still tried to struggle, even though in less than one second.
Player(s) have (a) feeling that hopes always come with them, so they always battle (FIGHT) to the last moment no matter whether they can win the game. And this SPIRITE exists in American movies and cartoons too. For instance, in the Space Jam, Michael Jordan leads his Ccartoon Ddream team to play against the Monster team. Cartoon team won the game by Michael’s final dunk at the very last second. It seems impossible, but that is the spirit which (THAT) sports want to convey (SEND) to public.

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