帮忙看看这段英语有没有语法错误?I can feel the wound of my heart until midnight.whom is my pain for?where is my source of the pain?It is only a abyss.要怎么翻译才合适

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帮忙看看这段英语有没有语法错误?I can feel the wound of my heart until midnight.whom is my pain for?where is my source of the pain?It is only a abyss.要怎么翻译才合适
帮忙看看这段英语有没有语法错误?
I can feel the wound of my heart until midnight.
whom is my pain for?
where is my source of the pain?
It is only a abyss.
要怎么翻译才合适

帮忙看看这段英语有没有语法错误?I can feel the wound of my heart until midnight.whom is my pain for?where is my source of the pain?It is only a abyss.要怎么翻译才合适
I can feel the wound of my heart until(till) midnight.
我可以感觉到我心上的伤口,直到午夜时分.
whom is my pain for?（Whom am I paining for?）
我在为谁忧伤?
where is my source of the pain?（What is the source of the pain?）
忧伤从何而来?
It is only a（an） abyss
那是一个深渊.
这貌似一首小诗,还挺有意境的,不过似乎不太地道.
外国人的文学,思维和我们大不一样啊~有些东西可能语法是不通的,但是那时修辞罢了,所以如果这是古典文学,就没有必要深究其语法了.就像中国文学中：我离她那么近,却又是那么远阿~这明显语法角度是病句~可是这就是文学阿.